India
Inside its heart, lies the impeccable shine
Nobleness is its virtue divine
Doting mother to one and all alike
It gave us birth, it gave us praise
Around the world, none is a country so great
Mother to all, Goddess to me
Yours is an undying jubilee
My heart fills with tears of joy
O my Mother, can I deny?
The love you gave, the food and shelter
Helping hand to each of your daughter
Ecstatic is one born to Thee
Roam the world, see all that is to see; but our India is the love tree
Hello there,
hey....I know its my millionth time asking for forgiveness for being so irregular with my blog. But how can I help? You guys seriously need to goad n complain to my principal about the teacher giving so much of home-work….and now, there’s the Unit Test Week coming up too….what can I do?
Hope you like this :)
28 comments:
Wow, that's a wonderful poem about such a wonder country!
Don't worry, it's ok, we know that you have a lot of school work. That's most important thing right now.
As a 13 year old, you must not forget to experience all of the joys that come with childhood. Your only young once, so relax, don't worry and enjoy it while you still can!
Don't worry about your blog, do what you can, and try your best. You need time to play, relax and just enjoy your youth, otherwise you'll grow up to be a grumpy old bitty like me!
Do your best and what you can, we understand. However, if you want, just give me your teacher's name and address, I will go and punch them in the nose for you, ok? lol... just kidding about the nose... I meant the the mouth! lol, ok, I'm getting out of here, and you... enjoy your childhood, don't worry.. be happy, ok?
very beautiful....it was wonderful of ya to express india so beautifully...
and
bachhe ko homework mil rhaa hai abhi bhi :O
principal ki toh pitti honi chaiye.... :D
Good Work little lady.
You have really brought out India's essence in ur poem.
Keep up the good work.
As far as you rschool life is concerned. There are always alternatives of doing and not doing work....isn't it??
:-)
Meghna,
Beautiful tribute to INDIA. Relax, Do not worry of being erratic here. Concentrate on your studies first as they take priority.
Looking for your views on my new posts.
Take care
Beautiful Poem. All d best for unit tests!
You are AH-mazing ! Your writing has literally moved me to tears - I believe that one day very soon , the entire world will know about you , for I believe that you will grow to be a writer of great magnitude & status . Yes, I believe you will outmatch and rival the likes of Ernest Hemingway , Virginia Wolf , and many others I want to wish you much deserved future success within all of your life endeavors & undertakings . Actually , I dont believe that you are a 12 /13 yr. old - I believe you are an incarnate of some old wise philosopher ..of this I am certain . Please continue doing homework ( I know you hate it now , but it will pay off in your near future ) and please continue your writing- save everything ! One day you will be published , I guarantee you ! :) Hugs across the many miles , Mia
Same is the case with me....my blog was almost dead for a past 2 months!!!!!!!!!!!!
I must say wonderful poem meghna...wish i could write something that good for my country
HATS OFF!!!!
great sense of nationalism meghna. i love the poem!
goodluck to your homework and quizes. you can make it.
we're just around. keep in touch!
Wonderful poem and Updated my blog after long time
awwwwwwww. all the best for your unit tests. i remember they used to be a pain and the teachers always used to harass the hell out of us!
Hey..Meghna..what happened..where are you..try to be punctual..well i am here with my new post..
http://myvanitymoments.blogspot.com/2009/08/maplease-dont-tell-this-to-papa.html
awww thats so sad sweetie, the hw part, i mean...
i love the poem.. it was so well written...
and well i hope im forgiven for being irregular at your blog..
by the way, theres a gift for you for friendship day..
its here :
http://harinip.blogspot.com/2009/08/virtual-real.html
That was an awesome poem Meghna, you have a great writing talent.
Good one indeed!!Good luck with your tests
Guess I have to write a poem for my motherland now..
In ten years time you will be an institution in writing..
So young yet so mature.
Wow! Great poem! You are really talented!
About blogging and studying- When you need a break from your studies, give us a post and keep us updated. And at other times keep your focus on your studies, since you can always bring back your readers at full speed through your beautiful writing!!
That is a beautiful work from you.
Make website india
Updated my blog.
:)
very sweet
:)
very sweet
hello!!
Meghna,
You have been absent for too long now, here as well as in my space.
Take care
Wow, so long for our Meghna to be quiet? Just as long as your ok, that's all that matters to me. I hope your doing well, whether your quiet or talkative. Just stay healthy, happy and safe@
Promise?
It must be hard to study a lot and run a blog, good luck!
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Fabulous poem, you did great with this post. Love it much.
Rudy
hey meghna great poem
i want u to see my blog as well
i hope u will!!
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